K - Kimo


Kimo is the Israeli version of haiku.

3 lines

10/7/6

unrhymed

a single image, frozen like a photo, no movement

I'm not sure how well I did with that last requirement.  I am pretty sure "no movement" isn't meant to signify something dead!

image public domain
Puddle

No longer pink, but bleached white by water

The worm lays in the puddle

I wish I had saved you

 

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  1. I think you did it perfectly :) Didn't know there was more than one kind of haiku...

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    1. Neither did I until I started the A-Z Challenge and searched for forms!

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