U - Used Up

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U - Used Up 

A ekphrastic poem based on this painting.  See E for a definition.

unsigned painting in my collection

Used up.

That’s how she felt.


An obligatory soiree

in too tight heels.


“Put yourself out there

and schmooze.

It makes me look good

when you look good.”


Yes, she felt used up.

Beat down.

Worn out.

Done in.

And over it.


She was determined

that last night was the last time

she’d be put on display.

No more playing Trophy Wife.

It was harder work than she expected.


But, damn... that prenup.

©2024 Lisa Smith Nelson. All Rights Reserved 

Comments

  1. LocksleyApril 24, 2024 at 10:18 AM

    The poem certainly fits the picture. Poor lady.
    Love
    Locksley at George's GP World

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    1. LisaApril 24, 2024 at 9:28 PM

      As soon as I saw the painting (in a thrift store) I saw an exhausted woman after a party, based on her dress and earrings.

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  2. Anne E.G. NydamApril 24, 2024 at 2:12 PM

    Ha ha! If she doesn't keep playing he'll just replace her. Hopefully the prenup will make it worthwhile.

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    1. LisaApril 24, 2024 at 9:29 PM

      That's so true, she needs to play along to keep the lifestyle.

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  3. Random MusingsApril 25, 2024 at 5:37 AM

    Love the poem and it perfectly captures the emotion of the painting
    Debbie
    #AtoZChallenge

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