Dark Days - a shadorma

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 Tanka Tuesday #204

The challenge is a syllabic poem inspired by this haiku by Sue Vincent.

clouds cover the moon,
beyond dawn’s pale horizon
sun rises unseen.

©2020 Sue Vincent

Mine is a shadorma.

 

The sunrise

hides.  I understand

and agree.

Who would want

to show her face in these days?

I stay hidden too.

©2020 Lisa Smith Nelson. All Rights Reserved


Comments

  1. willowdot21November 25, 2020 at 1:15 AM

    Hi willow here, I love your shadorma, I think s lot of us feel like that. Very well done ��

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    1. LisaNovember 25, 2020 at 10:43 AM

      Thank you. Yes, things to hide from this year!

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    2. Sue VincentNovember 26, 2020 at 4:50 AM

      Very appropriate for this year...

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    3. LisaNovember 26, 2020 at 8:08 AM

      Unfortunately so. Thanks for stopping in to read.

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