24 Seasons: Shousho 小暑 (Growing Heat)
24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 43
Growing Heat 小暑（Shousho）
"Your writing invitation is to choose one of the 24 Forms for your poem. You can use the kigo words and phrases from the Part I challenge post… or you can use the phrases I’ve created… Below… Use one kigo phrase in each of your three poems in whatever order you’d like. If you can’t write three poems, please write at least one."
Northern Hemisphere:
• #1: “smoldering heat”
• #2: “midsummer darkness”
• #3: “cutting the grass”
smold’ring heat
sleep flees the damp sheets
once again
up at two
I step out into the yard
dip feet in dog’s pool
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A Thunder Moon
(American Cinquain: "midsummer darkness")
no sleep
again tonight
in midsummer darkness
the Thunder Moon's bright light a lie
no rain
I Will Cut No Grass Today
(Double Etheree: "cutting the grass")
I
will not
be cutting
the grass today,
nor yet tomorrow.
Let it go to seed, wild.
Scattered to the chickadees
panting in the grape arbor's shade,
as they wait for cooling sundown to
touch the birdbath, presently a hot tub.
No, this summer grass will be left to brown.
I won't be bothered with it this year
nor yet next, perhaps not again.
Let the meadow mice burrow
away from noontime sun,
and searching house cats.
No, this summer
the grass will
not be
cut.
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Brilliant, Lisa! I, too, will not be cutting the grass. My lawn guys will, though. Lol! ;-)
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
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Extraordinary, Lisa. We've not grass to cut, but weeds seem to erupt through the rocks. 🌞
ReplyDeleteI love the double Etheree about cutting the grass. LOL! My husband has been cutting the grass, but I need to start helping him more often. The heat wears us out, so your sentiments would be so lovely. We live in an HOA so we have to keep the yard mowed. 💜
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your poetry, especially the Double Etheree. :)
ReplyDelete“the birdbath, presently a hot tub.”
ReplyDelete😱poor birds.
A trifecta of perfection, Lisa. The sleeplessness, the lying moon, and taking a stand against mowing. The mowing one always has me feeling like I'm behind so I keep putting it off...
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