Tanka Tuesday - Synonyms Only & Specific Form

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 Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge

 Synonyms Only & a Specific Form

Selma has asked us to write a tanka using synonyms for Mindless and Humdrum. 

After reading some of the synonyms (on www.thesaurus.com) I was reminded of something my niece's uncle said about the music at her wedding reception.  

credit 

no pleasing uncle

he always criticized her

down to little things

called wedding music white bread

we just called him moronic    


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  1. JadeLiOctober 20, 2024 at 8:49 PM

    great synonym choices, Lisa. The tanka gave me a chuckle.

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    1. LisaOctober 21, 2024 at 11:10 AM

      That "uncle" is one of my brothers. He is very judgmental about some things. It wasn't his wedding! He was married four times, maybe due to his attitudes! I don't eat white bread often, but it is the best bread for some things. Like peanut butter and jelly or grilled cheese!

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  2. Yvette M CalleiroOctober 21, 2024 at 3:37 PM

    Lol! This is great, Lisa! Thanks for the laugh!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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