Hangover - a pun-ku

 Tanka Tuesday #212


prompt words: loose and tight (synonyms only)

image Wikipedia, public domain


Drywall goes up

Hot and sloppy job

No way, bastard

I’m too plastered


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Pun-ku: must contain a pun on one or more words in the poem.  Human nature, witty or humorous.  (Not sure how well I did that!)

4 lines with syllables 4/5/4/4 and end rhyme xxaa.  

invented form by: https://salbuttaci.blogspot.com/2011/09/what-is-pun-ku.html


  1. LOL! That’s hysterical. What a great Senryu! Hanging drywall is one of the worst jobs in the world. Very good and funny too! <3


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