24 Seasons: Keichitsu (Wintering Insects Awake) No. 24

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 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 24

 Wintering Insects Awake (March 5 – 19) Keichitsu 啓蟄

"Your syllabic poetry writing invitation is to choose a kigo word or phrase from the seasonal kigo list on the post, or you can choose from the spring category on the kigo word list links below. Share your kigo word on your post."

It's been raining.  It's been snowing.  Then more rain.  It's muddy.  Very, very muddy.  So, what kigo phrase would be more fitting right now than Spring Mud?  Nothing I can think of.   It was made for me considering I took the photo below just two days ago!  I wrote a haiga.


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Comments

  1. D. Wallace PeachMarch 8, 2024 at 6:41 AM

    Ha! We are inundated in mud too. Snow, rain, snow, rain, mud mud mud. Love the photo too.

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  2. Yvette M CalleiroMarch 8, 2024 at 7:18 PM

    Oh, that was fantastic! Great poem!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  3. Word Craft Prose & PoetryMarch 10, 2024 at 9:56 AM

    Oh, this so perfect, Lisa. I loved the photo too. 💖

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  4. ben AlexanderMarch 12, 2024 at 9:49 AM

    This is super kewt!

    Sincerely,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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