Rain in the City
dVerse Prosery: Oh, Umbrellas
For
your prompt today, I’d like you to use the following lines in your
Prosery:
“What will I do there
without my hands upon
your summer face?”
“What will I do there
without my hands upon
your summer face?”
lines from the poem, Oh, Umbrellas, by Jeffrey Hermann
Write a piece of prosery of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line in the order in which it has been given. You may add or change punctuation, but you may not add or delete words.
Write a piece of prosery of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line in the order in which it has been given. You may add or change punctuation, but you may not add or delete words.
144 words
Summer
was ending.
I was told I was going to go
to school in
the city. I didn’t want to go. For all the glitz and glamor my
mother insisted I’d enjoy, I knew I wouldn’t. I hate the city.
It was noisy in the city. I preferred the
country. The country… melodies
of meadowlarks… chirping of crickets at dusk… frogs
in the pond (my brother called it The
Lake)
croaking
to one
another. In the city you couldn’t hear a bird to save your life.
Traffic,
horns, shouting, sirens… buses spewing black clouds of stinking exhaust
at every stop.
I
ask my mother,
“What will I do there?
Without my hands upon
your summer face
I’ll perish. Freeze in the inhospitable city.”
Her response?
“Don’t be dramatic. It’s not forever, you’ll be back for winter break. Go pack. And don’t forget your umbrella.”
“What will I do there?
Without my hands upon
your summer face
I’ll perish. Freeze in the inhospitable city.”
Her response?
“Don’t be dramatic. It’s not forever, you’ll be back for winter break. Go pack. And don’t forget your umbrella.”
©2025 Lisa Smith Nelson. All Rights Reserved
Nicely done! The mother’s response is so typical.
ReplyDeleteI love the ending, the reminder to bring her umbrella. I love the artwork!
ReplyDeleteWe have to learn 'it's not forever' and it can be a tough lesson.
ReplyDeleteLisa, I like the story you spun around the given line.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Lovely art as well.
ReplyDeleteWhen I visit Brooklyn or NYC I don't know what I would do without Prospect Park or Central Park. I need me some country! Nice write
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