October's Lament

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Friday Writing #198: October Writes
"...write poetry or prose from the point of view of October. Let October write and tell."

Ahhh…

to be the warming months of spring

to welcome bud and blossom

with heady scents of jasmine

and the buzzing of the bees

to hear the joyful cries of children

sporting in green meadows

deprived by long white winter


No...

instead of one last summer bird song

one lazy afternoon

my lot’s to bring a bitter breath

a freezing death

to flowers

mere nodding heads

on drooping stems

come morning


Alas…

my displays of color

(gone the greens)

ocher

russet

gold

and crimson

last too short a time

then

f

a

l

l

in drifts

unwanted

raked and burned

blown into grungy gutters


Ahhh…

to be a gentle April

the month of poetry and prose

to hear the multitude of cheers

“Spring is Here!”

on eager tongues

and know they cheer for me


©2025 Lisa Smith Nelson. All Rights Reserved  


Comments

  1. vanderloostOctober 10, 2025 at 11:16 PM

    Your poem has s wave pattern of joy melancholy and again joy.

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  2. Rosemary Nissen-WadeOctober 11, 2025 at 12:54 AM

    Vivid! (Alas, poor Northern October! But its twin, Southern October, has an opposite take to tell.)

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  3. Penelope NotesOctober 11, 2025 at 5:21 AM

    Bitter breath and freezing death is great imagery for October but it should be proud as that is how new life appears in Spring. :)

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  4. AnonymousOctober 12, 2025 at 7:03 PM

    Poor Northern October! Virginia's Octobers are very festive, times of mild (relatively less humid) weather and colorful leaves. In the Southern Hemisphere October gets to be spring. But in the Northern States...!

    Pris cilla King

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  5. MarjaOctober 13, 2025 at 12:20 AM

    Oh love the waves of spring and october and enjoyed the structure of your poem

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  6. IntelliblogOctober 14, 2025 at 4:32 AM

    What a wonderful poem. Our October in Australia is a Spring month (equivalent to Northern April!), so you know what month you need to come and take a holiday in Australia!

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  7. purplepeninportland.comOctober 17, 2025 at 5:24 PM

    "my lot’s to bring a bitter breath

    a freezing death

    to flowers

    mere nodding heads

    on drooping stems

    come morning"

    Love that imagery!

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