Fort Bragg, CA

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Friday Writings #183

"...I'd like you to write about a perfect afternoon, either one you've had or would like to have."

Fort Bragg, CA


hair windtangled

salty and damp

another day of fog


cold wet sand

between my toes

clam shows at surf’s edge


precarious steps

over seaweeded rocks

pools left behind by the tide


sea anemones swaying

hermit crabs scrabbling

sea stars clinging


jacket pockets full

olive shells and sea glass

to fill a jar on the window sill


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Comments

  1. Your summery poem is lush and so vivid I could feel it, breathe it in .... Wow!

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  2. Oh yes, Lisa. You took me back into adolescence with this one. We, from Nebraska had driven to Oregon to visit my maternal grandparents. My grandmother took we children to the Pacific beach. She dug at a clam mound to gather some for food at home. But there were no clams. We did come home with a sack of seashells, of which we had never seen before. The lived in Warrenton
    Oregon.

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  3. Ah yes, I remember some like this too – though in my case in Tasmania.

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  4. To capture a good memory to keep forever shining in the window is wonderful! Jae

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  5. A jar of beautiful memories,,,,still have mine.

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  6. I love the afternoons I spent beachcombing in Maine. This reminds me so much of those days.

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  7. Such a vivid description of your walk along the beach - A vicarious pleasure for me, as it is cold, wet and dark in Melbourne on this winter's night.

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  8. Sounds like a perfect day to me. I love beach glass.

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