Friday Writings #195: Revisiting Old Favorites
"...for today’s optional prompt, I invite you to revisit one of our old prompts. Maybe one you missed? Or one you could explore again?"
I have chosen a prompt from 2022, one I'd missed. I have "subverted" the prompt in that the narrator is not a stranger to the person she is writing, but they are both strangers to me, although one's name isn't unknown.
Friday, November 25, 2022
Friday Writings #54: Writing to a Stranger
“...write to a stranger. Not just any stranger, but someone specific you have in mind, whether observed or imagined.”
(Don't forget, you can always subvert a prompt too – by doing the opposite of what it says, or by writing about why you refuse to write to it, or by deliberately misunderstanding it, or by going off at a tangent....)
Georgia, my dearest friend Georgia,
Does it disappoint to know
the public sees you
as “that woman” who paints
those macabre skulls?
Or their obsession with seeing
genitalia in your flowers,
despite your adamant denials?
How maddening.
Shall we play along
with their sensual views,
call them “senscapes,”
or perhaps “sinscapes” fits better?
Though I fear your masterpieces
will end up memes of bawdy nature,
spreading like misinformation spewed
by the President.
“Her Grey Lines with Black,
Blue and Yellow, delicately open
as genitalia in full bloom,”
to quote one odious critic.
Can you sue?
Let’s blame that husband of yours,
promoting your flowers as lurid, erotic!
Dirty old man.
Both adjectives are true!
I promise, I’ll stop harping on his age…
but, really Georgia.
I’ll let you know,
I much prefer your landscapes.
Back of Marie’s No. 4 for example.
Now, no one could take that one
for anything but rumpled bed sheets!
All my love,
and I'll see you next month,
L
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Lisa Smith Nelson. All Rights Reserved
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Back of Marie's No.4, by Georgia O'Keeffe, 1931 |
What an interesting take on the prompt - a real ode to the artist and poem of celebration and appreciation - Jae
ReplyDeleteSuch a delight to read! So wonderfully tongue-in-cheek. (I especially enjoyed it because I am a huge Georgia fan.)
ReplyDeleteIntriguing and well written and how frustrating that they branded her work like that. I had a look at it and it very beautiful
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