Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge: Javanese Poetry
Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge: Javanese Poetry
Shalom, Friends! For those who may not know me, my name is David (‘ben Alexander’) Bogomolny, and I’m really happy to be hosting this week’s #TankaTuesday challenge.
This week we are going to try a new (to us) poetic form.
So, this week’s challenge is to compose a ‘Sekar ageng’ poem of your own, according to the following rules, as laid out by Murisopsis:
Sekar ageng – This Javanese form is traditionally recited as a song. The modern form is comprised of any number of quatrains (4 line stanzas) with 17 syllables per line. Each line is divided by caesurae (breaks) after sections of 4 syllables, 6 syllables and 7 syllables in that order.
potato soup / a simple winter meal / warm with crusty sourdough bread
not my tubers / my neighbor shares with me / I'll save a bowl in return
along with bread / it's the least I can do / to repay his gracious gift
at the window / I watch the snow falling / grateful the day's chores are done
cat in my lap / curled in a fuzzy ball / purrs vibrate against my leg
the embers glow / not much warmth left in them / just honey glow in the dark
I wake the cat / she moves nearer the hearth / hoping to find some warmth there
before too long / she'll join me in the bed / her tail curled around her nose
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Lisa,
ReplyDeleteThis is cozy perfection! I could practically taste the soup and feel the cat purring. Your poem makes me want to curl up by the fire too. 🍲🐾
Much love,
David
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Beautiful words and I love how you worked the prompt. Thank you. Xo, selmamartin
ReplyDeleteAw! Very sweet, Lisa! I love it!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
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Fabulous poetry Lisa. I enjoyed each poem. The cat Sekar ageng, is so spot on for my cats too.
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