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 Poets and Storytellers United

Friday Writings #126 

"So the optional prompt for this week is to write a poem – or, if you prefer, a very short piece of prose – as a textu of exactly 160 characters including title and spaces."  The standard limit for SMS (Short Message Service) is 160 characters.)  Textu is a form invented by Fady Joudah. 

More difficult than it sounds!   Counting words is simple.  It's not so simple when every space and punctuation mark is counted too! 

This is not a reflection on my dislike of the prompt.  I like the prompt.   It's just what came to mind. 

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To place restrictions

on our words

in verse,

or voice,

is to allow no freedom

of the tongue,

nor

wings to spread, 

take flight,

and soar

beyond our

temporal woes.

 

©2024 Lisa Smith Nelson. All Rights Reserved



Comments

  1. J Cosmo NewberyMay 10, 2024 at 6:50 PM

    Nice take on the prompt. I agree.

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  2. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMay 11, 2024 at 4:21 AM

    Oh, I think this one flies very well despite the restrictions! Thanks for playing along.

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  3. Debi SwimMay 11, 2024 at 5:35 AM

    I agree, though with this poem you've whittled down your truth to its beautiful essence.

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  4. alan1704May 11, 2024 at 8:20 AM

    I agree, you have used the words so well. Great work.

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  5. HelenMay 11, 2024 at 8:55 AM

    How wonderfully clever of you to compose a brilliant 'counter-attack.' Love it.

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  6. purplepeninportland.comMay 18, 2024 at 4:29 PM

    This is so clever!

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